Writing this week

Hi I'm Ingrid and I'm From Wesley Intermediate School and Today I Wrote a Two Narratives in one kind of story I wrote about a little girl with her mother and they find a friend and they live with them till their husbands get back from war. I think I did well I might need to add a few more things but in like 15-20 minutes I wrote 5 longish paragraphs we only needed to write three but I did more. Here is a sneak peak at my writing. (I might add a few more paragraphs over the weekend)